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From: Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de>
Date: Thu, 26 Dec 2013 02:47:45 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] man: grammar and wording improvements

This is a recurring submission and includes corrections to:
- missing words, preposition choice.
- change of /lib to /usr/lib, because that is what most distros are
  using as the system-wide location for systemd/udev files.

Conflicts:
	man/journalctl.xml
	man/sd_bus_message_get_cookie.xml
	man/sd_bus_request_name.xml
	man/systemctl.xml
	man/systemd-networkd.service.xml
	man/systemd.device.xml
	man/systemd.exec.xml
	man/systemd.timer.xml
	man/udev.xml
---
 man/daemon.xml          | 2 +-
 man/sd_is_fifo.xml      | 2 +-
 man/systemd.service.xml | 2 +-
 man/systemd.unit.xml    | 2 +-
 4 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/man/daemon.xml b/man/daemon.xml
index 7790420..1fe4546 100644
--- a/man/daemon.xml
+++ b/man/daemon.xml
@@ -408,7 +408,7 @@
                         description files.</para>
 
                         <para>In systemd, if the developer or
-                        administrator wants to make sure a service or
+                        administrator wants to make sure that a service or
                         other unit is activated automatically on boot,
                         it is recommended to place a symlink to the
                         unit file in the <filename>.wants/</filename>
diff --git a/man/sd_is_fifo.xml b/man/sd_is_fifo.xml
index 4bb2236..58cd1c9 100644
--- a/man/sd_is_fifo.xml
+++ b/man/sd_is_fifo.xml
@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@
                 called to check whether the specified file descriptor
                 refers to a special file. If the
                 <parameter>path</parameter> parameter is not
-                <constant>NULL</constant>, it is checked whether file
+                <constant>NULL</constant>, it is checked whether the file
                 descriptor is bound to the specified file
                 name. Special files in this context are character
                 device nodes and files in <filename>/proc</filename>
diff --git a/man/systemd.service.xml b/man/systemd.service.xml
index e869f95..e3a370f 100644
--- a/man/systemd.service.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.service.xml
@@ -427,7 +427,7 @@
                                 <programlisting>ExecStart=/bin/sh -c 'dmesg | tac'
                                 </programlisting>
 
-                                <para>Only select environment variables
+                                <para>Only select environment variables that
                                 are set for executed commands. See
                                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd.exec</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>.
                                 </para>
diff --git a/man/systemd.unit.xml b/man/systemd.unit.xml
index b70c5e9..f6b4b24 100644
--- a/man/systemd.unit.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.unit.xml
@@ -548,7 +548,7 @@
                                 of units. When systemd stops or restarts
                                 the units listed here, the action is
                                 propagated to this unit.
-                                Note that this is a one way dependency —
+                                Note that this is a one-way dependency —
                                 changes to this unit do not affect the
                                 listed units.
                                 </para></listitem>