From 24f82a86f4d61809f9eb913c1244a4a6df7ba896 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jan Engelhardt Date: Thu, 26 Dec 2013 02:47:45 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] man: grammar and wording improvements This is a recurring submission and includes corrections to: - missing words, preposition choice. - change of /lib to /usr/lib, because that is what most distros are using as the system-wide location for systemd/udev files. Conflicts: man/journalctl.xml man/sd_bus_message_get_cookie.xml man/sd_bus_request_name.xml man/systemctl.xml man/systemd-networkd.service.xml man/systemd.device.xml man/systemd.exec.xml man/systemd.timer.xml man/udev.xml --- man/daemon.xml | 2 +- man/sd_is_fifo.xml | 2 +- man/systemd.service.xml | 2 +- man/systemd.unit.xml | 2 +- 4 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/man/daemon.xml b/man/daemon.xml index 7790420..1fe4546 100644 --- a/man/daemon.xml +++ b/man/daemon.xml @@ -408,7 +408,7 @@ description files. In systemd, if the developer or - administrator wants to make sure a service or + administrator wants to make sure that a service or other unit is activated automatically on boot, it is recommended to place a symlink to the unit file in the .wants/ diff --git a/man/sd_is_fifo.xml b/man/sd_is_fifo.xml index 4bb2236..58cd1c9 100644 --- a/man/sd_is_fifo.xml +++ b/man/sd_is_fifo.xml @@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ called to check whether the specified file descriptor refers to a special file. If the path parameter is not - NULL, it is checked whether file + NULL, it is checked whether the file descriptor is bound to the specified file name. Special files in this context are character device nodes and files in /proc diff --git a/man/systemd.service.xml b/man/systemd.service.xml index e869f95..e3a370f 100644 --- a/man/systemd.service.xml +++ b/man/systemd.service.xml @@ -427,7 +427,7 @@ ExecStart=/bin/sh -c 'dmesg | tac' - Only select environment variables + Only select environment variables that are set for executed commands. See systemd.exec5. diff --git a/man/systemd.unit.xml b/man/systemd.unit.xml index b70c5e9..f6b4b24 100644 --- a/man/systemd.unit.xml +++ b/man/systemd.unit.xml @@ -548,7 +548,7 @@ of units. When systemd stops or restarts the units listed here, the action is propagated to this unit. - Note that this is a one way dependency — + Note that this is a one-way dependency — changes to this unit do not affect the listed units.