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Date: Tue, 26 Aug 2014 21:14:11 -0400
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Subject: [PATCH] man: reword sd-hibernate-resume description and add link
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"each device" was suggesting that this service might be instantiated
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multiple times. "hibernation resume" was too jargon-y.
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---
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 man/systemd-hibernate-resume@.service.xml | 11 ++++++-----
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 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/man/systemd-hibernate-resume@.service.xml b/man/systemd-hibernate-resume@.service.xml
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index 9b188b0d96..30bfd88101 100644
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--- a/man/systemd-hibernate-resume@.service.xml
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+++ b/man/systemd-hibernate-resume@.service.xml
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@@ -54,13 +54,14 @@
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         <refsect1>
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                 <title>Description</title>
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-                <para><filename>systemd-hibernate-resume@.service</filename> is a
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-                service that initiates hibernation resume from a device
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-                containing the resume image. It is instantiated for each
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-                device that is configured for resuming from.</para>
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+                <para><filename>systemd-hibernate-resume@.service</filename>
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+                initiates the resume from hibernation. It is
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+                instantiated with the device to resume from as the
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+                template argument.</para>
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                 <para><filename>systemd-hibernate-resume</filename> only supports
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-                the in-kernel hibernation implementation, known as swsusp.
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+                the in-kernel hibernation implementation, known as
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+                <ulink url="https://www.kernel.org/doc/Documentation/power/swsusp.txt">swsusp</ulink>.
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                 Internally, it works by writing the major:minor of specified
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                 device node to <filename>/sys/power/resume</filename>.</para>
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