From 07e7e0378c3f2b73e56e886f7a4b59068dbbbc55 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001

From: "Jason St. John" <jstjohn@purdue.edu>

Date: Tue, 10 Dec 2013 00:10:03 -0500

Subject: [PATCH] man: improve wording and comma usage in

 systemd.journal-fields(7)

Improve wording under "Description" and "_KERNEL_DEVICE="

---

 man/systemd.journal-fields.xml | 16 ++++++++--------

 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/man/systemd.journal-fields.xml b/man/systemd.journal-fields.xml

index 8a15598..bb89ed5 100644

--- a/man/systemd.journal-fields.xml

+++ b/man/systemd.journal-fields.xml

@@ -51,14 +51,14 @@

                 <title>Description</title>

                 <para>Entries in the journal resemble an environment

-                block in their syntax, however with fields that can

+                block in their syntax but with fields that can

                 include binary data. Primarily, fields are formatted

                 UTF-8 text strings, and binary formatting is used only

                 where formatting as UTF-8 text strings makes little

                 sense. New fields may freely be defined by

                 applications, but a few fields have special

                 meaning. All fields with special meanings are

-                optional. In some cases fields may appear more than

+                optional. In some cases, fields may appear more than

                 once per entry.</para>

         </refsect1>

@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@

                                 <term><varname>_UID=</varname></term>

                                 <term><varname>_GID=</varname></term>

                                 <listitem>

-                                        <para>The process, user and

+                                        <para>The process, user, and

                                         group ID of the process the

                                         journal entry originates from

                                         formatted as a decimal

@@ -190,7 +190,7 @@

                                 <term><varname>_CMDLINE=</varname></term>

                                 <listitem>

                                         <para>The name, the executable

-                                        path and the command line of

+                                        path, and the command line of

                                         the process the journal entry

                                         originates from.</para>

                                 </listitem>

@@ -389,12 +389,12 @@

                                         the major and minor of the

                                         device node, separated by <literal>:</literal>

                                         and prefixed by <literal>b</literal>. Similar

-                                        for character devices, but

+                                        for character devices but

                                         prefixed by <literal>c</literal>. For network

-                                        devices the interface index,

+                                        devices, this is the interface index

                                         prefixed by <literal>n</literal>. For all other

-                                        devices <literal>+</literal> followed by the

-                                        subsystem name, followed by

+                                        devices, this is the subsystem name

+                                        prefixed by <literal>+</literal>, followed by

                                         <literal>:</literal>, followed by the kernel

                                         device name.</para>

                                 </listitem>