From cae52ffc976561b6c847a38e3ea9d9a9ce2c1513 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001

From: Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de>

Date: Thu, 26 Dec 2013 02:47:45 +0100

Subject: [PATCH] man: grammar and wording improvements

This is a recurring submission and includes corrections to:

- missing words, preposition choice.

- change of /lib to /usr/lib, because that is what most distros are

  using as the system-wide location for systemd/udev files.

Conflicts:

	man/journalctl.xml

	man/sd_bus_message_get_cookie.xml

	man/sd_bus_request_name.xml

	man/systemctl.xml

	man/systemd-networkd.service.xml

	man/systemd.device.xml

	man/systemd.exec.xml

	man/systemd.timer.xml

	man/udev.xml

---

 man/daemon.xml          | 2 +-

 man/sd_is_fifo.xml      | 2 +-

 man/systemd.service.xml | 2 +-

 man/systemd.unit.xml    | 2 +-

 4 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/man/daemon.xml b/man/daemon.xml

index 7790420..1fe4546 100644

--- a/man/daemon.xml

+++ b/man/daemon.xml

@@ -408,7 +408,7 @@

                         description files.</para>

                         <para>In systemd, if the developer or

-                        administrator wants to make sure a service or

+                        administrator wants to make sure that a service or

                         other unit is activated automatically on boot,

                         it is recommended to place a symlink to the

                         unit file in the <filename>.wants/</filename>

diff --git a/man/sd_is_fifo.xml b/man/sd_is_fifo.xml

index 4bb2236..58cd1c9 100644

--- a/man/sd_is_fifo.xml

+++ b/man/sd_is_fifo.xml

@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@

                 called to check whether the specified file descriptor

                 refers to a special file. If the

                 <parameter>path</parameter> parameter is not

-                <constant>NULL</constant>, it is checked whether file

+                <constant>NULL</constant>, it is checked whether the file

                 descriptor is bound to the specified file

                 name. Special files in this context are character

                 device nodes and files in <filename>/proc</filename>

diff --git a/man/systemd.service.xml b/man/systemd.service.xml

index e869f95..e3a370f 100644

--- a/man/systemd.service.xml

+++ b/man/systemd.service.xml

@@ -427,7 +427,7 @@

                                 <programlisting>ExecStart=/bin/sh -c 'dmesg | tac'

                                 </programlisting>

-                                <para>Only select environment variables

+                                <para>Only select environment variables that

                                 are set for executed commands. See

                                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd.exec</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>.

                                 </para>

diff --git a/man/systemd.unit.xml b/man/systemd.unit.xml

index b70c5e9..f6b4b24 100644

--- a/man/systemd.unit.xml

+++ b/man/systemd.unit.xml

@@ -548,7 +548,7 @@

                                 of units. When systemd stops or restarts

                                 the units listed here, the action is

                                 propagated to this unit.

-                                Note that this is a one way dependency —

+                                Note that this is a one-way dependency —

                                 changes to this unit do not affect the

                                 listed units.

                                 </para></listitem>