From 8236dcd99b7e259d40317cafce236c8e77e2d9c5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: William Jon McCann <william.jon.mccann@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 7 Jun 2013 11:09:04 -0400
Subject: [PATCH 20/34] Message string cleanups

Make use of terminology consistent. Remove jargon.
---
 grub-core/normal/menu_text.c | 21 +++++++++------------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)

diff --git a/grub-core/normal/menu_text.c b/grub-core/normal/menu_text.c
index 2f84fcc..9d20c6b 100644
--- a/grub-core/normal/menu_text.c
+++ b/grub-core/normal/menu_text.c
@@ -157,9 +157,8 @@ print_message (int nested, int edit, struct grub_term_output *term, int dry_run)
 
   if (edit)
     {
-      ret += grub_print_message_indented_real (_("Minimum Emacs-like screen editing is \
-supported. TAB lists completions. Press Ctrl-x or F10 to boot, Ctrl-c or F2 for a \
-command-line or ESC to discard edits and return to the GRUB menu."),
+      ret += grub_print_message_indented_real (_("Press Ctrl-x or F10 to start, Ctrl-c or F2 for a \
+command prompt or Escape to discard edits and return to the menu. Pressing Tab lists possible completions."),
 					       STANDARD_MARGIN, STANDARD_MARGIN,
 					       term, dry_run);
     }
@@ -167,8 +166,8 @@ command-line or ESC to discard edits and return to the GRUB menu."),
     {
       char *msg_translated;
 
-      msg_translated = grub_xasprintf (_("Use the %C and %C keys to select which "
-					 "entry is highlighted."),
+      msg_translated = grub_xasprintf (_("Use the %C and %C keys to change the "
+					 "selection."),
 				       GRUB_UNICODE_UPARROW,
 				       GRUB_UNICODE_DOWNARROW);
       if (!msg_translated)
@@ -181,17 +180,15 @@ command-line or ESC to discard edits and return to the GRUB menu."),
       if (nested)
 	{
 	  ret += grub_print_message_indented_real
-	    (_("Press enter to boot the selected OS, "
-	       "`e' to edit the commands before booting "
-	       "or `c' for a command-line. ESC to return previous menu."),
+	    (_("Press 'e' to edit the selected item, "
+	       "or 'c' for a command prompt. Press Escape to return to the previous menu."),
 	     STANDARD_MARGIN, STANDARD_MARGIN, term, dry_run);
 	}
       else
 	{
 	  ret += grub_print_message_indented_real
-	    (_("Press enter to boot the selected OS, "
-	       "`e' to edit the commands before booting "
-	       "or `c' for a command-line."),
+	    (_("Press 'e' to edit the selected item, "
+	       "or 'c' for a command prompt."),
 	     STANDARD_MARGIN, STANDARD_MARGIN, term, dry_run);
 	}	
     }
@@ -440,7 +437,7 @@ menu_text_print_timeout (int timeout, void *dataptr)
       || data->timeout_msg == TIMEOUT_TERSE_NO_MARGIN)
     msg_translated = grub_xasprintf (_("%ds"), timeout);
   else
-    msg_translated = grub_xasprintf (_("The highlighted entry will be executed automatically in %ds."), timeout);
+    msg_translated = grub_xasprintf (_("The selected entry will be started automatically in %ds."), timeout);
   if (!msg_translated)
     {
       grub_print_error ();
-- 
1.8.4.2