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- The Way that can be told of is not the eternal Way;

- The name that can be named is not the eternal name.

  The Nameless is the origin of Heaven and Earth;

! The Named is the mother of all things.

  Therefore let there always be non-being,

    so we may see their subtlety,

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  The Nameless is the origin of Heaven and Earth;

! The named is the mother of all things.

! 

  Therefore let there always be non-being,

    so we may see their subtlety,

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  But after they are produced,

    they have different names.

+ They both may be called deep and profound.

+ Deeper and more profound,

+ The door of all subtleties!