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     <para>
         This chapter describes an infrastructure where computers
-        communicate one another through the telephone line.  This
-        infrastructure could result very useful to you when you want
-        to share IP packages with your friends and the only
-        communication medium you and your friends have access to is a
-        telephone network.
+        communicate one another using the telephone line as medium for
+        data transmission.  This infrastructure could result very
+        useful to you when you want to use your computer to share
+        information with your friends and the only communication
+        medium you and your friends have access to is a telephone
+        network.
     </para>
 
 </sect1>