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with the restrictions impossed by cuban State and tries to
find an alternative way to express oneself differently. In
this environment, one can realize that the cuban political
- system lacks of such independent alternatives for cuban people
- to use. I don't pretend to use this book to detail the
- political system I live on, but I do want to say that the more
- I got involved with the cuban political system the more
- distance I felt between the most pure of myself and the
- actions the system expected from me to do as system
- administrator. Nevertheless, it is motivating to see how
- we are able to realize about such things thank to bright minds
- like Richard Stallman with his philosophy about freedom and an
- immense free software community under constant development
- which provides the medium to express the free software
- philosophy as a way of living.
+ system lacks of such independent alternatives for cubans to
+ use. I don't pretend to use this book to detail the political
+ system I live on, but I do want to say that the more I got
+ involved with the cuban political system the more distance I
+ felt between the most pure of myself and the actions the
+ system expected from me to do as system administrator.
+ Nevertheless, it is motivating to see how we are able to
+ realize about such things thank to bright minds like Richard
+ Stallman with his philosophy about freedom and an immense free
+ software community under constant development which provides
+ the medium to express the free software philosophy as a way of
+ living.
@@ -46,47 +46,49 @@
real meaning of free software and the philosophy behind it.
The free software is built by people and dedicated to people
whom might be in need of it, with the hope of being useful and
- garantee the freedom of computer users paying or not for it.
- The cuban State, on the other hand, introduces free software
- in the sense of its price, not in the sense of the freedom it
- provides to people. The cuban State uses free software as
- another impositions to control what software does people use
- and which one doesn't.
+ garantee the freedom of computer users paying a monetary price
+ or not for it. The cuban State, on the other hand, introduces
+ free software at convenience because there are entire
+ operating systems free of charge one can study and change as
+ needed, not in the sense of the freedom it provides to people.
+ The cuban State uses free software as another impositions to
+ control what software does people use and which one
+ doesn't.
When I was working in the health sector of cuban State, my
superior told me once that I couldn't keep using &TCD; on
- servers any longer, because the institution at central
- level stopped using Red Hat related distribution and
- started to use Debian. I don't want to enter in a debate
- why one or another distribution, that's not the point. But
- I do want to mentione that this decision couldn't be taken
- from one day to another without previous preparation of
- all system administrator personal. My opinion was rejected
- and they kept themselves showing me that it was a politics
- to follow, no matter what I would think of it. I decided
- to fire up myself. I couldn't accept that, specially
- because I cannot change the operating system I use each
- time a new guy takes control on central levels. I'm very
- sorry about that.
+ servers any longer, because system administrators at
+ central level stopped using Red Hat related distribution
+ and started to use Debian. I don't want to enter in a
+ debate why one or another distribution, that's not the
+ point. But I do want to mentione that this decision
+ couldn't be taken from one day to another without any
+ consideration about all the time people spent studying
+ (and working for) one specific GNU/Linux distribution. My
+ opinion was rejected and they kept themselves showing me
+ that it was a politics to follow, no matter what I thought
+ about it. I couldn't accept that and fired up myself. I
+ cannot change from one operating system to another just
+ because someone wants to.
Some people might see that it is free
software anyway, but think that again: Shouldn't you have the
freedom to decide what free software to use, and also what
community you join to? No one must impose you anything about
which social community you participate in, that is a decision
- you need to take yourself, not someone else. Sadly, the
- medium where such free software communities live in (i.e.,
- Internet) is only available for institutions related to cuban
- State, making it very difficult for cuban people without any
- political relation with the cuban State to make decitions like
- that and integrate any free software community at all. I
- strongly beleive that, for the free software philosophy to
- touch the heart of cuban people, the free software communities
- must be accessable for cuban people. However, while the cuban
- State keep itself being inbetween, controlling how the cuban
- people can or cannot integrate any specific way of living,
- there will not be free software in Cuba, nor any freedom for
- cuban people to make use of.
+ you need to take yourself, not someone else. Sadly for cuban
+ people, the medium where such free software communities live
+ in (i.e., Internet) is only available for institutions related
+ to cuban State, making it very difficult for cubans without
+ any political relation with the cuban State to make decitions
+ like that and integrate any free software community at all. I
+ strongly beleive that for the free software philosophy to
+ touch the heart of cubans, the free software communities must
+ be accessable to all cubans. However, while the cuban State
+ keeps itself being inbetween, controlling how the cubans can
+ or cannot integrate any specific way of living, there will not
+ be free software in Cuba, nor any freedom for cubans to make
+ use of.
@@ -96,14 +98,14 @@
software must be initiated from people deepest comprehension
of what they are doing, not from impositions of another
inquestionable order everybody need to comply with. So,
- cuban people need to feel what freedom is and express it in
- order to perceive a deep impact of free software in cuban
- society. We cannot pretend that cuban people use free
- software based on a lie or a distorted idea of the freedom it
- provides, that idea won't last much before it falls itself
- into pieces. People need a way of identifying themselves
- apart from any social or political system in order for them to
- be able of decide whether or not to be part of one.
+ cubans need to feel what freedom is and express it in order to
+ perceive a deep impact of free software in cuban society. We
+ cannot pretend that cubans use free software based on a lie or
+ a distorted idea of the freedom it provides, that idea won't
+ last much before it falls itself into pieces. People need a
+ way of identifying themselves apart from any social or
+ political system in order for them to be able of decide
+ whether or not to be part of one.
@@ -115,51 +117,48 @@
restricts information,
See resolution 129 emitted by the cuban Ministerium of
- Informatics and Telecomunications (MIT).
+ Informatics and Telecommunications (MIT).
- you may find them very similar. The resolution
- 129 was emitted to instituions in the statal sector only and
- regulates what can and cannot be done inside that area when
+ you may find them very similar. The resolutions
+ emitted by cuban State are specific to statal instituions when
using computers to share information. I don't know of any
legal estipulation about using information and communication
technologies by nautural people outside the statal sector and
spite of it, I've heard of people that has been called by the
cuban State security departament to explain why they built a
- LAN in the neighbourhood to share information (isn't that
- obvious) and finally they were intimidated to stop doing so.
- There is no legal instrument in either direction one can use
- as pattern to act legally. The cuban State has all the legal
- power to condemn you, but you are completly naked against it.
- The most you can do is to break relations with it as long as
- it be possible so you are not helping him in that policts of
- condemning you any more.
+ computer network in the neighbourhood to share information
+ (isn't that obvious) and finally they were intimidated to stop
+ doing so. There isn't a legal instrument in either direction
+ that one can use as pattern to act legally. The cuban State
+ has all the legal power to condemn you as cuban, but you are
+ completly naked against it.
- Internet access is another affair obscured by cuba State.
- Around 2008, Cuba and Venezuela signed an agreement to connect
+ Internet access is another obscured issue inside Cuba. Around
+ 2008, Cuba and Venezuela signed up an agreement to connect
each nation with a trasatlantic fiber optic cable for high
- speed Internet access. In 2011 the cable toched the cuban
- territory, but nothing has been mentioned about it after that.
- There is a terrible silence about it. Some people wounder why
- spend so much money on that if no cuban can use it, other
- think that the hole project failed and it is impossible to
- transmit data through it. It is difficult to know exactly
- because, again, there is no alternative way of communication
- but those provided and controlled by the cuban State. The
- fact is that there is no way for cuban people to contract an
- Internet service at home. It is almost unbelievable to see how
- the cuban churches along the island have limitations in this
- area as well. However, the same isn't true for extrangers with
- passport from other countries that visit Cuba or are resident
- inhere. The cuban State permits these persons to pay the
- Internet service, in offices called Telepuntos or for
- accessing it at home using different fees. Some cuban people
- cannot understand this, nor the logic behind it either.
+ speed Internet access. In 2011 the cuban State announced the
+ cable had been touched the cuban territory, but nothing more
+ has been mentioned so far. There is a terrible silence about
+ it. Some people are woundering why to spend so much money on
+ that if no cuban can use it, others prefer to think that the
+ entire project failed. It is difficult to know what happend
+ exactly because, again, there is no alternative way of
+ communication but those provided and controlled by the cuban
+ State. The fact is that there isn't a way for cubans to
+ contract an Internet service at home, nor a viable way to
+ acquire a fixed telephone line at home either. However, the
+ same isn't true for extrangers coming from other countries to
+ visit Cuba or stay inhere as residents. The cuban State
+ permits these persons to pay the Internet service, in offices
+ called Telepuntos or for accessing it at home using different
+ fees. Some cubans cannot understand this, nor the logic
+ behind it either.
- In Cuba there is only one telecomunication organization named
+ In Cuba there is only one telecommunication organization named
ETECSA. This organization is very tied to cuban State and
controls everything related to telephone networks and
dedicated links for data transmistion in the island.
@@ -167,45 +166,51 @@
I heard of a case where someone tried to establish an
independent connection from Cuba to another country using
the air as phisical medium for data trasmission and that
- person is pressently suffering years in prison for doing
- that. At this moment I have no more information but this.
- It is very difficult to be accurate about such things
- without an alternative information medium apart from those
- under cuban State control.
+ person is pressently suffering years in cuban prisons for
+ doing that. The cuban State considered such action as a
+ risk for national security. At this moment I have no more
+ information about this case. It is very difficult to be
+ accurate about such things without an alternative
+ information medium, apart from those under cuban State
+ control.
Based on the fact that the telephone network is the
- only communication medium most cuban people have direct access
- to, our attention is centered on it, as phisical medium to
+ only communication medium most cubans have direct access to,
+ our attention is centered on it, as phisical medium to
exchange data using computers. It is important to remark
that, when using the telephone network as medium for data
transmission, there are limitations in the number of
simultaneous connections it is possible to phisically
- establish between computers, the way of obtaining the required
- communication devices, and the way information might be
- exchanged with public services available on different networks
- outside Cuba's political boundaries. Nevertheless, the
- telephone network has a national scope that can be used by
- computers to transfer data all over the island at a cost of
+ establish between computers, it could be difficult to obtain
+ the required communication devices inside the island, and it
+ could be too much expencive to make international calls in
+ order to exchange information with public services available
+ on different networks outside Cuba's political boundaries.
+ Besides all these restrictions, the telephone network has a
+ national scope that can be efficiently used by computers to
+ transfer data all over the island at a cost of national
telephone calls.
- I beleive that most of problems the cuban people presently
- have are caused by a lack of information we need to face in
- order to understand what we are and where we are going to, in
- the sense of an interdependent human being's society. To face
- the information problem, we need to provide independent ways
- for cuban people to express themselves in freedom and provide,
- this way, the routes needed to work out most problems we face
- today. That's my goal with this work: educating myself in the
- compromise of providing an independent space for cuban people
- to discuss and coordinate how to create collaborative networks
- throuth the cuban telephone network
+ I beleive that most of problems the cubans presently have are
+ caused by a lack of information we need to face in order to
+ understand what we are and where we are going to, in the sense
+ of an interdependent human being's society. To face the
+ information problem, it is needed to make available
+ independent ways for cubans to express themselves in freedom
+ and provide, this way, the routes needed to work out the
+ problems we face today. That's my goal with this work:
+ educating myself in the compromise of providing an independent
+ space for cubans to discuss and coordinate how to create
+ collaborative networks using the cuban telephone
+ network
- Considering that I and most cuban poeple haven't Internet
- access at present time.
+ Considering that I and most cubans haven't Internet access
+ at present time.
- to share information using computers in freedom.
+ as phisical medium to transmit information using
+ computers in freedom.