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On April 2009, I decided to stop working for cuban State. This
- decision emerged itself on me from an increasing feeling of
- repression against system administrators by cuban State which
- might be acceptable when one chooses to agree with the
- limitations and play the game. When you don't agree with them
- and try to find an alternative way to express yourself
- differently, you'll realize that the cuban political system
- lacks of such independent alternatives for anyone to use. I
- don't pretend to use this book to detail the political system
- I live on, but I do want to say that the more I involve with
- the cuban political system the more distance I feel between
- the most pure of myself and the actions the system expect from
- me to do. However, it is motivating how oneself can realize
- about such things thank to bright minds like Mr. Richard
- Stallman with his philosophy about freedom and an immense
- free software community under constant development which
- provides the medium to express the free-software philosophy as
- way of living.
+ decision emerged with the increasing feeling of repression
+ I experimented when one, as system administrator, isn't agree
+ with the restrictions impossed by the State and try to find an
+ alternative way to express differently. In this situation one
+ can realize that the cuban political system lacks of such
+ independent alternatives for anyone to use. I don't pretend
+ to use this book to detail the political system I live on, but
+ I do want to say that the more I got involved with the cuban
+ political system the more distance I felt between the most
+ pure of myself and the actions the system expected from me to
+ do. However, it is motivating to see how people could realize
+ about such things thank to bright minds like Mr. Richard
+ Stallman with his philosophy about freedom and an immense free
+ software community under constant development which provides
+ the medium to express the free software philosophy as way of
+ living.
@@ -29,48 +28,76 @@
reaching a technology independency
which is
quiet contradictory to me. What independency we are talking
about here? Independency for whom, and from whom? The only way
- I see for the cuban State to reach the independency it looks
- for (as long as I understand its political system) is creating
- and maintaining an entire infrastructure (e.g., computers,
- network devices, operating systems, etc.,) of its own without
- any intervention from the outside. Otherwise, the cuban State
- will be inevitably attached to someone that may differ from it
- and that is something unacceptable because may compromise the
- former idea. If you think this is what cuban State needs, I
- have to say that it is one of the most nonsense idea one can
- ever think of, specially when you consider the the way
- international communities of free software and hardware
- providers interact one another in the modern world.
+ I see for the cuban State to reach the independency it looks for
+ (as long as I understand its political system) would be
+ creating and maintaining an entire infrastructure (e.g.,
+ computers, network devices, operating systems written from
+ scratch, etc.,) inside its political boundaries without any
+ intervention from the outside. Otherwise, the cuban State
+ would be inevitably attached to someone that can differ from
+ it and, that is something unacceptable for the cuban State
+ because would compromise the former idea it initially had
+ about its independency.
- The free software emerged from people who know what freedom
- is. It is impossible to defend freedom if one don't feel what
- it is. The cuban State never talks (at least on the public
- media) of introducing free software for freeing the society of
+ The cuban State is misunderstanding or confusing the real
+ meaning of free software. The free software is made by people
+ and dedicated to anyone whom might be in need of it, with the
+ hope of being useful and garantee the freedom of computer
+ users. The cuban State introduces free software because it is
+ free in the sense of price, not in the sense of freedom. The
+ cuban State uses free software as another impositions to
+ control what software does people use and which one don't.
+ Some people might see that it is free software anyway, but
+ think again: Shouldn't you have the oportunity to decide what
+ free software to use, and also what community you join to? No
+ one must impose you anything about which social community you
+ participate in, that is a decision you need to take yourself.
+ Sadly, the medium where such free software communities live in
+ (i.e., Internet) is only available for institutions related to
+ cuban State making it very difficult for cuban people without
+ any political relation with the cuban State to make decitions
+ like that and integrate any free software community at all. I
+ strongly beleive that, for the free software to reach cuban
+ people, free software communities must be accessable for cuban
+ people first, so the cuban talent can be added to free
+ software philosophy. However, till the cuban State be
+ controlling inbetween how the cuban people can or cannot
+ integrate an specific way of living to its own, there will be
+ no free software in Cuba, nor any freedom for the cuban people
+ to make use of.
+
+
+
+ It is impossible to defend freedom if one doesn't feel what it
+ is. The cuban State never talks (at least on the public media)
+ of introducing free software for freeing the cuban society of
privative software. In fact, if you compare the privative
software and the way cuban State operates the information
- area, based on the resolution 149 emitted by the Minister of
+ media, based on the resolution 149 emitted by the Minister of
Informatics and Telecomunications (MIT), you may find them
- very similar. There is a very strict control over all the
+ very similar. There is an obsession by controlling all the
information media on the country and they cannot be used to
- other purposes different to those defined by the State. For
- example, to reach Internet access, cuban people need to be
- working for the State somehow and that way comply with the
- politics impossed by it about information management. There is
- no a legal way for cuban people to contract an Internet
- service at home. The most one can do in Cuba to share data is
- trying to resolve
a fixed telephone line at
- home to gain access to the telephone network and then use it
- to transmit data using computers. The telephone network most
- people have access to, however, there are limitations in the
- number of simultaneous connections that can be performed and
- finding the Modem devices required.
+ purposes others than those defined by the State. For example,
+ to reach Internet access, cuban people need to be working for
+ the cuban State somehow and that way comply with the politics
+ impossed by it about information management which is strict,
+ at the point of denying service based on restrictions. There
+ is no a legal way for cuban people to contract an Internet
+ service at home. The most one can do in Cuba to share data
+ with friends is trying to resolve
a fixed
+ telephone line at home to gain access to the cuban telephone
+ network and then use it to transmit data using computers. The
+ telephone network is the communication medium most people have
+ access to, however, there are limitations in the number of
+ simultaneous connections that can be performed and finding the
+ Modem devices required.
Modem devices aren't available on stores. In fact, the few
computation hardware available on stores has prices that
- very few people can pay for (making this another
- limitation for average poeple).
+ almost no one can pay for (making this another limitation
+ for average poeple).