diff --git a/Manuals/en/Texinfo/Repository/trunk/Identity.texi b/Manuals/en/Texinfo/Repository/trunk/Identity.texi index 3783441..1d722e4 100644 --- a/Manuals/en/Texinfo/Repository/trunk/Identity.texi +++ b/Manuals/en/Texinfo/Repository/trunk/Identity.texi @@ -35,11 +35,11 @@ the CentOS promotion stuff, etc. @xref{trunk Identity Brands}, for more information. @item The CentOS Themes -The CentOS themes are a set of image files connected by one unique -visual style. The CentOS themes implements CentOS project corporate -visual identity in each visual manifestation of CentOS project (e.g., -distributions, websites, promotion stuff, etc.). +The CentOS themes are a set of image files connected all together by +one unique visual style. Each theme is organized in different visual +manifestations, in order to cover each visual manifestation of The +CentOS Project (i.e., distributions, websites, promotion stuff, etc.). @xref{trunk Identity Themes}, for more information. @end table diff --git a/Manuals/en/Texinfo/Repository/trunk/Identity/Themes/Motifs/Flame.texi b/Manuals/en/Texinfo/Repository/trunk/Identity/Themes/Motifs/Flame.texi index 57c0b78..ee98640 100644 --- a/Manuals/en/Texinfo/Repository/trunk/Identity/Themes/Motifs/Flame.texi +++ b/Manuals/en/Texinfo/Repository/trunk/Identity/Themes/Motifs/Flame.texi @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ visual identity (i.e., distribution stuff, promotion stuff, websites stuff, etc.) with the new major release of CentOS distribution all together at once. -Producing a new visual style is not one day's time task. Once we have +Producing a new visual style is not one day's task. Once we have defined the artistic motif, we need to propagate it through all visual manifestations of The CentOS Project corporate visual identity. When we say that we could produce one new visual style every two years we @@ -75,8 +75,8 @@ design land. Using ``randomly generated'' conception to produce artistic motifs could be, practically, a way for anyone to follow in order to produce maintainable artistic motifs in few steps. -Due to the ``randomly generated'' nature of Flame filter, you may find -that the same pattern is not always used each time you use the Flame +Due to the ``randomly generated'' nature of Flame filter, we find that +@emph{Flame} pattern is not always the same when we use @emph{Flame} filter interface. Using the same pattern design for each visual manifestation is @@ -95,8 +95,8 @@ themeselves, and so, the reason we use to define the word ``theme'' as: a set of images visually connected among themeselves. @end quotation -In order to recreate the same flame pattern every time we may need to, -the Flame filter interface provides the @samp{Save} and @samp{Open} +In order for us to reproduce the same flame pattern always, +@emph{Flame} filter interface provides the @samp{Save} and @samp{Open} options. The @samp{Save} option brings up a file save dialog that allows you to save the current Flame settings for the plug-in, so that you can recreate them later. The @samp{Open} option brings up a file @@ -140,9 +140,9 @@ Once you've done with black radial degradation, reduce the @samp{Paper} layer opacity to 20%. Notice that when we duplicate one layer, the mask information related -to layer is preserved from one layer to another. This saves some time -when you want to have different layers with the same mask information -on them. +to layer is preserved from previous to next layer. This saves us some +of the time required to produce different layers with the same mask +information on them. Duplicate @samp{Paper} layer and rename it @samp{Stripes}. Remove paper pattern from @samp{Stripes} layer. Fill @samp{Stripes} layer diff --git a/Manuals/en/Texinfo/Repository/trunk/Identity/Themes/Motifs/Modern/Backgrounds.texi b/Manuals/en/Texinfo/Repository/trunk/Identity/Themes/Motifs/Modern/Backgrounds.texi index eef32da..87c608c 100644 --- a/Manuals/en/Texinfo/Repository/trunk/Identity/Themes/Motifs/Modern/Backgrounds.texi +++ b/Manuals/en/Texinfo/Repository/trunk/Identity/Themes/Motifs/Modern/Backgrounds.texi @@ -97,7 +97,8 @@ theme. Artistic motifs are interpretations of that idea. Inside this directory artistic motifs are organized by name (e.g., TreeFlower, Modern, etc.). -Inside each motif directories represent just one unique artistic motif. +Each artistic motif directory represents just one unique artistic +motif. The artistic motif is graphic design used as common pattern to connect all visual manifestations inside one unique theme. The artistic motif diff --git a/Manuals/en/Texinfo/Repository/trunk/Scripts/Bash/Functions/Render.texi b/Manuals/en/Texinfo/Repository/trunk/Scripts/Bash/Functions/Render.texi index 7aa7cf6..d29ff82 100644 --- a/Manuals/en/Texinfo/Repository/trunk/Scripts/Bash/Functions/Render.texi +++ b/Manuals/en/Texinfo/Repository/trunk/Scripts/Bash/Functions/Render.texi @@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ information, theme Screenshots, etc.). This directory structure controls the main development are of themes design models. In this directory structure we found design components that specify @emph{how} artistic motifs' backgrounds are applied to -each image design that need to be produced. Inside design models you +each image design that needs to be produced. Inside design models you find translation markers used by translation files in order to translate images in different languages, releases, and architectures. diff --git a/Manuals/en/Texinfo/Repository/trunk/Translations.texi b/Manuals/en/Texinfo/Repository/trunk/Translations.texi index 2c15e69..248562a 100644 --- a/Manuals/en/Texinfo/Repository/trunk/Translations.texi +++ b/Manuals/en/Texinfo/Repository/trunk/Translations.texi @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ The @file{trunk/Translations} directory exists to: When you create artwork for CentOS distribution you find that some artworks need to be created for different major releases of CentOS -distribution and inside each major release they need to be created for +distribution and inside each major release that needs to be created for different locales. To get an approximate idea of how many files we are talking about, consider the followig approximate statistic: @@ -617,7 +617,7 @@ translation directory structure, duplicates it for each release number specified in the @samp{--filter='release-number'} argument and produces release-specific directories. As part of template translation duplication process take place, the @command{centos-art} script adds -release-specific replacement commands to each specific translation +release-specific replacement commands for each specific translation file inside release-specific directories. As result, specific translation files, inside release-specific directories, contain template translation replacement commands @emph{plus},