From de48ae4f9efa40df9f8ef74f480d805a6bac73b9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Alain Reguera Delgado <alain.reguera@gmail.com>
Date: Sep 21 2011 16:57:27 +0000
Subject: Update `Manuals/Production/identifying-title.docbook'.


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diff --git a/Manuals/Tcar-ug/Manuals/Production/identifying-title.docbook b/Manuals/Tcar-ug/Manuals/Production/identifying-title.docbook
index 9746d03..3befd12 100644
--- a/Manuals/Tcar-ug/Manuals/Production/identifying-title.docbook
+++ b/Manuals/Tcar-ug/Manuals/Production/identifying-title.docbook
@@ -3,24 +3,19 @@
     <para>
         Once you've make yourself an clean idea of what the
         documentation manual is for and the needs behind, it is time
-        for to define the manual's title and the manual's directory
-        name.  Both manuals' title and manual's directory name
-        describe what the documentation manual is about. The manual's
-        title is used inside the documentation and the manual's
-        directory name is used to store the related source files
-        inside the repository. As convenction, manual's title is a
-        few words phrase while manual's directory name is the
+        for you to define the manual's title and the manual's
+        directory name.  Both manuals' title and manual's directory
+        name describe what the documentation manual is about. The
+        manual's title is used inside the documentation and the
+        manual's directory name is used to store the related source
+        files inside the repository. As convenction, manual's title is
+        a few words phrase while manual's directory name is the
         abbreviation of that phrase set as manual's title.
     </para>
 
     <para>
-        Following with our example, the documentation manual was
-        initially titled <quote>The CentOS Artwork Repository File
-        System</quote> but that name was too long to remain that way,
-        so it was abbreviated soon into <quote>TCAR-FS</quote> which
-        is less descriptive but easier to remember and doesn't need to
-        be translated into other languages. The related manual's
-        directory for it would be
+        Following with our example, the manual's title has been
+        already mentioned and its directory was set to
         <quote><filename>Tcar-fs</filename></quote> in order to comply
         with the file name convenctions described at <xref
         linkend="repo-convs-filenames" />.