From 897ab612303315f92dfba1064db36976b0d14652 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Alain Reguera Delgado <alain.reguera@gmail.com>
Date: Sep 09 2012 01:27:33 +0000
Subject: Update `trunk/Manuals/Tcar-ug/Preface/history.docbook' file.


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diff --git a/Manuals/Tcar-ug/Preface/history.docbook b/Manuals/Tcar-ug/Preface/history.docbook
index a52d932..2197f1f 100644
--- a/Manuals/Tcar-ug/Preface/history.docbook
+++ b/Manuals/Tcar-ug/Preface/history.docbook
@@ -5,22 +5,26 @@
         url="mailto:centos-devel@centos.org">The CentOS Developers
         Mailing List</ulink> around 2008, on a discussion about how to
         automate slide images used by Anaconda (&TCD; installer).  In
-        such discussion, Ralph Angenendt rose up his hand to ask
-        &mdash;Do you have something to show?&mdash;.
+        such discussion, <ulink
+        url="http://wiki.centos.org/RalphAngenendt">Ralph
+        Angenendt</ulink> rose up his hand to ask &mdash;Do you have
+        something to show?&mdash;.
     </para>
 
     <para>
-        To answer the question, Alain Reguera Delgado suggested a bash
-        script which combined SVG and SED files in order to produce
-        PNG images in different languages &mdash;in conjunction with
-        the proposition of creating a Subversion repository where
-        translations and image production could be distributed inside
-        &TCC;&mdash;.
+        To answer the question, <ulink
+        url="http://wiki.centos.org/AlainRegueraDelgado">Alain Reguera
+        Delgado</ulink> suggested a bash script which combined SVG and
+        SED files in order to produce PNG images in different
+        languages &mdash;in conjunction with the proposition of
+        creating a Subversion repository where translations and image
+        production could be distributed inside &TCC;&mdash;.
     </para>
 
     <para>
-        Karanbirn Sighn considered the idea intresting and provided
-        the infrastructure necessary to support the effort.  This way,
+        <ulink url="http://wiki.centos.org/KaranbirSingh">Karanbir
+        Singh</ulink> considered the idea intresting and provided the
+        infrastructure necessary to support the effort.  This way,
         &TCAS; and &TCAR; were officially created and made world wide
         available. In this configuration, users were able to register
         themselves and administrators were able to assign access
@@ -30,18 +34,32 @@
 
     <para>
         Once &TCAR; was available, Alain Reguera Delgado uploaded the
-        bash script used to produce the Anaconda slides; Ralph
-        Angenendt documented it very well; and people started to
-        download working copies of &TCAR; to produce slide images in
-        their own languages.
+        bash script used to produce the Anaconda
+        slides;<footnote><para>See <ulink
+        url="https://projects.centos.org/trac/artwork/browser/trunk/Main/render.sh?rev=15"
+        /></para></footnote> Ralph Angenendt documented it very
+        well;<footnote><para>See <ulink type="http"
+        url="https://projects.centos.org/trac/artwork/wiki/HowToTranslateSlides"
+        /></para></footnote> and people started to download working
+        copies of &TCAR; to produce slide images in their own
+        languages.<footnote><para>See the following <ulink
+        url="http://www.google.com/search?q=anaconda+slides+site%3Alists.centos.org">Google
+        search</ulink>.</para></footnote>
     </para>
 
     <para>
-        From this time on, the &TCAR; has been under constant
-        development to automate the production of &TCP; corporate
-        visual identity.  The list of all changes is available in the
-        repository's logs. A resumen of relevant changes is available
-        in <xref linkend="repo-history" />.
+        From this time on &TCAR; has been evolving into an automated
+        production environment where &TCC; can conceive &TCP;
+        corporate visual identity.
+    </para>
+        
+    <para>
+        The exact changes commited to &TCAR; through history can be
+        found in the <ulink
+        url="https://projects.centos.org/trac/artwork/timeline">repository
+        logs</ulink> so you can know the real history about it. For
+        those of you who just want to get a glance of changes
+        committed, see <xref linkend="repo-history" />.
     </para>
 
 </section>