From 603abe405ab98addc83eb928c2f2a6491c56c2f4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Alain Reguera Delgado <alain.reguera@gmail.com>
Date: Nov 05 2011 02:58:11 +0000
Subject: Update `Connectivity/Ppp/overview.docbook'.


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diff --git a/Manuals/Tcpi-ug/Connectivity/Ppp/overview.docbook b/Manuals/Tcpi-ug/Connectivity/Ppp/overview.docbook
index 2b430be..4753f88 100644
--- a/Manuals/Tcpi-ug/Connectivity/Ppp/overview.docbook
+++ b/Manuals/Tcpi-ug/Connectivity/Ppp/overview.docbook
@@ -5,10 +5,10 @@
     <para>
         This chapter describes how you can use the Point-to-Point
         Protocol (PPP) to create collaborative networks in situations
-        the telephone network is the only medium for data transmission
-        you and your friends have access to.  The operating system
-        used by both server and client computers will be &TCD; release
-        5.5<footnote>
+        where the telephone network is the only medium you and your
+        friends have access to, for data transmission.  The operating
+        system used by both server and client computers will be &TCD;
+        release 5.5<footnote>
         <para>
             I want to thank my friend Manual Chavez Manzano (Manny)
             for finding a way to download this release of &TCD; and